Thursday, April 28, 2011

"Dog's Death," John Updike

She must have been kicked unseen or brushed by a car.
Too young to know much, she was beginning to learn
To use the newspapers spread on the kitchen floor
And to win, wetting there, the words, “Good dog! Good dog!”

We thought her shy malaise was a shot reaction.
The autopsy disclosed a rupture in her liver.
As we teased her with play, blood was filling her skin
And her heart was learning to lie down forever.

Monday morning, as the children were noisily fed
And sent to school, she crawled beneath the youngest’s bed.
We found her twisted and limp but still alive.
In the car to the vet’s, on my lap, she tried

To bite my hand and died. I stroked her warm fur
And my wife called in a voice imperious with tears.
Though surrounded by love that would have upheld her,
Nevertheless she sank and, stiffening, disappeared.

Back home, we found that in the night her frame,
Drawing near to dissolution, had endured the shame
Of diarrhea and had dragged across the floor
To a newspaper carelessly left there. Good dog.

3 comments:

  1. The morose and sorrowful diction conveys a sense of calm acceptance of the dog's death. I dislike the fact that the dog dies because I know that once a person becomes bonded with the dog its part of the family. The " twisted and limp" dog that was sprawled out on the floor, but was still alive. This image is very tragic because the dog is in a helpless state unable to preform any activity. This poem is very heartbreaking because the dog does die and the owners shed their tears for a lost member of the family.

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  2. Updike's somber descriptions of death reveal the speaker's true sadness when he contemplates losing a treasured pet. The speaker details stroking "her warm fur" to show his affinity for his pet dog. However, the speaker displays somber examples to show his discontent. Updike's sad examples allude to his overall love, yet disappointment in a pet's lifespan.

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  3. This is a very sad poem of a dogs death. It shows how devestating is can be to lose a pet. It is a very sad poem but it is also a very good one.

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